Tuesday, September 05, 2006

Sid & Maury (fiction)

NOTE: I've taken this story down for retooling and/or submission elsewhere.

6 comments:

Bk30 said...

LOL. That was good. I love the full circle "hey, Sid"

larisse said...

Hahahaha... This was too cute. It reminded me of a Laurel and Hardy skit with a little bit of "Waiting for Godot". I can just hear this conversation happening over and over, with little Stewart chiming in every now and then. The flow of the conversation was nice.

Anne/kq said...

That made me laugh so hard. I enjoyed it a lot.

Simran said...

hahahaha too cool! I really loved this story. very creative!

Carol said...

I can see the frustration of characters stuck (literally) together for a long time with no way out.

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Cave Dweller said...

Bravo! Nice frustration on the part of both. Loved the idea of Stewart too!