Since I missed last week, I figured I'd get this week's entry in early. With title-stealing apologies to King Crimson . . .
NOTE: I've taken this story down for retooling and/or submission elsewhere.
Wednesday, September 20, 2006
Flash Fiction Friday #4
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7 comments:
ROFL! Oh that was good, fast paced, whitty, nope nothing bad to see here folks..except for that pugnent elephant dung!
LOL LOL LOL! Love it. :)
This made me smile. Nice setup of Anne's character. I kind of wanted more out of the 'clear blue sky' -- it seemed to betoken a shift in reality that isn't then realized (as if a litigious elephant isn't unreal enough ;).
But maybe it comes in Chapter 2! Write it!
That was funny. I never thought of the elephant's side of things in politics. ;-)
"There's no such thing as defamation of species - not yet, anyway."
Hah, I loved this ... although I bet his pit bull buddy might disagree! Fun (and funny) story.
Witty and fun--poor maligned elephant !
Snarfed at suing the Republican Party. Good one!
Quick, clean read and funny to boot!
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