Wednesday, September 20, 2006

Flash Fiction Friday #4

Since I missed last week, I figured I'd get this week's entry in early. With title-stealing apologies to King Crimson . . .

NOTE: I've taken this story down for retooling and/or submission elsewhere.

7 comments:

Bk30 said...

ROFL! Oh that was good, fast paced, whitty, nope nothing bad to see here folks..except for that pugnent elephant dung!

Cath Smith said...

LOL LOL LOL! Love it. :)

John said...

This made me smile. Nice setup of Anne's character. I kind of wanted more out of the 'clear blue sky' -- it seemed to betoken a shift in reality that isn't then realized (as if a litigious elephant isn't unreal enough ;).

But maybe it comes in Chapter 2! Write it!

CaySedai said...

That was funny. I never thought of the elephant's side of things in politics. ;-)

Unknown said...

"There's no such thing as defamation of species - not yet, anyway."

Hah, I loved this ... although I bet his pit bull buddy might disagree! Fun (and funny) story.

Kristina said...

Witty and fun--poor maligned elephant !

Mary Kay said...

Snarfed at suing the Republican Party. Good one!

Quick, clean read and funny to boot!